to tell you the truth i miss the times we shared
i miss you but wish i never had
your were the happness of my evenings,the dream of my nights
i cant believe you will never change
only time will tell that i'll be back in your arms again ..
my friends tell me your not the one
i keep all these excusese to think you would change
but all i get in return is a slap in the face,...
((i onced said that my mr.right would come
but dudes make every thing seem so unreal))
i can tell that you have real emotions for me but you keep on making this same mistake((so say it with your actions))GO HEAD BLAM IT ALL ON ME
REMEMBERING
i remember the day we looked at the sky
i remember the first day i met you
i remember the first time you told me your life time stroy
i remember our first kiss
i remember our first argument
i remember the fist time i foud out your little secrets
i remember hearing such negitive things about you
i remember your brown eyes
i can still feel you tender kiss i can still fell your gental touch..(got me high)
i remember your percious voice
cant let remember just be USE..I GOT TO LET IT GO
MY EPIPHANY JUST BEGAIN

This is awesome work! I know that you are trying to be vague because you have some specific memories...but I want to challenge you try to make an outline of memories for the reader (even if you make it up). Who is this person that you love so much - is he someone you see everyday? is he someone that you met once? Can you hint at what happened without telling me?
ReplyDeleteKeep it up!
-Miss Molly